Sunday, March 30, 2008

Insincere Creature

Enslaves your mind not
Enslaves your heart not
With even such preciuos creatures
They are just like a rainbow at first
The better you come to know them
You will agree that they are just like a rainbow.
When a rainbow hides itself from your sight,
What you see are raining cats and dogs.

Yogyakarta;
March 08, 2008

3 comments:

Joe said...

Dear Writer,
I just would like to comment about raining like cats and dogs.
It is a bits confusing perhaps for some people, how rain like can be like cats and dogs. Raining is water pouring from the sky and cats and gods are two totally different animals with their unique characteristics. What is the relevant here? To understand a poems for some people is not always easy. Joe

Joe said...

Dear Writer,
I just would like to comment about raining like cats and dogs.
It is a bits confusing perhaps for some people, how rain like can be like cats and dogs. Raining is water pouring from the sky and cats and dogs are two totally different animals with their unique characteristics. What is the relevant here? To understand a poems for some people is not always easy. Joe

Joe said...

Dear Writer,
I just would like to comment about raining like cats and dogs.
It is a bits confusing perhaps for some people, how rain can be like cats and dogs. Raining is water pouring from the sky and cats and dogs are two totally different animals with their unique characteristics. What is the relevant here? To understand a poems for some people is not always easy. Joe